What the hell is wrong here?
For weeks I have been here as a guest reading fantasy after fantasy where the details are so inconsistent that it made any pleasure I might derive from it disappear before I can get to the end.
If you're going to go into detail, which makes it much better in my opinion, at least get it straight in your head first. Keep notes if needed as you write it, then read your fantasy a few times, word by word, before you dump it on us.
I just read a story where they entered HIS place but he had to leave HER place just a few sentences later.
As for the ones that go forever without a single blank space between paragraphs, well, I won't even try to read your fantasies any more!! Shit! If you can't take the time to hit the enter key a few times, I can't take the time to read your fantasy!
There's a lot of great talent here, I can see that, but there's so many of you that don't seem to notice the hint on the submission page (TIP: Add a blank line between paragraphs to make your fantasy easier to read!).
Don't you find it easier to read when it's broken into separate paragraphs?
I love reading erotica, but only when it's well written and thought out. That's why I won't write it - I don't write well.
Sorry if I upset anyone here by this, but those of you who get upset must know it refers to you!
QueenB(itch)
|
Submitted by:
QueenB
view profile
|
You have new unread mail messages!
Click here for your Inbox!
