Watch me ... Watching pt 2

The next day I went over to the building where her apartment was located and convinced the building manager who was a friend of mine I to let me into her apartment. The husband had not moved out and it was rumor that he was staying with his girlfriend. At first it was eerie being there when I enter the apartment. It was like the place was in another zone or something, everything seem so surreal. I walked around the apartment just looking not touch anything for it was if I didn't want to leave any more than my foot print in the place. Until I found the bath room with the large window that face out toward my apartment,I walked over and looked into the tub and saw the stool that she must have sat on when she was taking her shower. Standing there I closed my eyes and thought of her, seeing her as I last had seen her. I opened my eyes and smelled what I assume was her perfume and I felt her near me but my friend the building manager entered telling me we have to go broke the spell and the environment of the bathroom fell back into the norm. I walked out of the apartment following behind him feeling her following behind me. When I shut and locked the door I knew she was on the other side waiting. Later that night I found myself standing in front of the window looking out across the space at the window of the apartment waiting and I didn't have to wait long. A dim light came on in the back ground of the room as her shadows darken the window. The night was clear but the moon was waning and not as bright as the nights before. I could still see her moving around as if setting up for something. She was naked as she had been all the night before,her shape was now clear to me,her heavy full breasts flowing down to smaller waist line which flowed down to full hips giving her a generous hour glass figure. Her dark hair was free flowing as it had been on other nights, nothing was different other than I now know the truth and yet I was standing there as if nothing had happened. My lover had noticed by reoccupation with information about the woman across the way. At first he laughed and teased me, asking if I had started liking women. I just smiled at him keeping to myself that I had never not like them, I just happened to have fallen in love with him. As soon as he left work I took up my position in front of the window with the newspaper article in hand and the key to her apartment which I had stolen. I waited until the light came on and saw her shadow and then I made my move. Running the short distance from my apartment to hers,taking the steps up to her fourth floor apartment two at a time I was breathing hard when I arrived at her door. Not from the run but from the anticipation of facing the unknown and the known. I walked into the dark apartment locking the door behind me and went down the hall to the bathroom where I could hear the shower running. I stood there in the hallway for a moment now scared out of my mind but desire held me in place and pushed me forward into the bathroom and the woman waiting there.

She was standing in the large tub facing out naked with her back toward the door and me. Her long dark hair was now wet and clinging to itself and her. I walked further into the room and could feel the heat and steam rising from the tub and the shower. I stood there with my heart beating so loudly that I could hear in my ears and my throat felt so tight that I thought I couldn't speak, but I had found enough of a voice to say her name.


She didn't move at first or even act like she heard me. Then she slowly turned to face me and my heart all but stopped. She was beautiful. I had earlier when I was in the apartment had taken a picture of her with me when I left I just had to have something to hold to remember her by and now she was in front of me.

"You came..." she said as she looked at me with those great dark eyes of hers with such wonder.

"Yes, Madelena I did. I felt your loneliness and your need of me," I said as I walked toward her and into her arms.

Her skin now damp from the shower and warm mist was warm and supple under my hands just as warm as the lips that kissed mines. I joined her in the tub under the warm shower getting wet down to my skin. I released her long enough to strip out of my wet clothes then pulling her wet naked body against mine. We kissed again this time going deeper and the world was forgotten as we made love in front of the window.

Chasing water droplets with my tongue down the front of her body I went to my knees in the tub and spreading the lips of her pussy I sucked the hard nub into my mouth. Rolling it between my lips she put her left leg over my shoulder and stood on one leg with me to support as she sunk her hands into my hair and rode my lips and tongue. The warm water beating down on us added to the heat and joined us in rhythm as we moved from one position to another this time she went to her knees. Madelena sucked as much as she could of my cock into her mouth as braced me against the shower wall near the window and the shower door. Licking my cock from base to head and then sucking on the head as she rolled my balls around in her hands had me see stars. Madelena then reached further between my legs and stopping along the way to rub the space between my balls and asshole before sliding one then two fingers into my ass hole. I grabbed her head and fucked her face as my orgasm raced through my body shaking me to my core. Firing hot cum into her mouth with each jerking of my hips I felt her swallowing my cock and cum further down her throat. She had me I was her prisoner and she held on until she sucked me dry. I leaned back against the shower walk and on shaking legs, that gave out under me and I slid down into the tub with Madelena between my legs. She climbed on to me and slides her pussy on and over my cock and with a chaste soft kiss on my lips she started to ride me. Slowly at first with the beating of the shower above us it was like making love in the rain. She sat straight and tall on the lower half of my body with her large pillowly breasts rise up and falling with her movement. I read up and pulled her down tome and kissed her deeply tasting the mixture of myself and her that past between us. Fondling her breasts I looked up into her face as I again felt the call and knew that release was coming again. She knew it as well and I watched as tears slowly ran down her face and she whispered over and over again thank you,thank you. We came together screaming,moaning and crying.. as the shower rained down on us not cooling off your desire but joining us together as one if only for a short time.

It was sometime later that night that I let myself out of the apartment and walked back over to mine. My lover was there,it seems that he had come early that evening and I could tell that he had seen all. I listen without reply to his shouting and demanding for an explanation. I had none to give and as I walked to the window to look out I knew that she would not be there she was free now... My lover and I parted company not long after that night. He suggested that I check my heart to see what I really wanted out of life.

I never spoken of that night until now. I never went back to the apartment and I now in live in another state. I never told my lover the truth, that the woman he had seen me making love from the window of out apartment was a ghost. How could I explain something that I didn't understand myself? It has been years and I have moved on with my life,but there is not a night that I don't think of Madelena and pray that she has found peace .....

Brian Culbertson: Madelena

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